HI Sally~^_^

2012-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello sally. I also wish that you could meet with your family on the weekend. Although you can't meet with your family, I hope that you have a happy day on saturday. Keep your finger acrossed. Was you born in Sophia? then, are your family in there? I think I heard that at the last class. it's right? Perhaps, I could heard that mistakenly. haha ;) On the weekend, I have a plan which is going to movie theater with my friend. Today, SPIDERMAN launched for showing in the movie theater. I expect that it will be a very exciting movie. Homework) 1) If I came to home earlier, I would prepare ~. 2) If we lived in Rome, Francesco would visit to us. 3) If Tim and Tom were older, they would play ~. 4) If he was my friend, I would invite him to my ~. 5) If Susan studied harder, she would be better ~ 6) If they had enough money, they would buy ~ 7) If you did a paper round, you would earn ~ 8) got/ would ask 9) did hurry/ would catch 10) was rainy /would take

강사 첨삭

Hello there^_^ Thank you so much for sending your homework and doing your homework.^_^You are such a diligent student. I really hope I will have a wonderful Saturday.^_^ Oh I also like to watch the movie \"Spiderman\" but sad to say my friends are all busy. I don\'t want to watch it alone. I hope you enjoy the movie.^_^And lastly, you did a good job with your homework^^Keep it up.^_^ T. Sally

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