Hi Sally

2012-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hello Sally,TGIM! In order that I can watch "Runing man" and "the Law of Jungle" which are my favorite program,I like Sunday of the weeks. Recently, In the "the Law of Jungle", a tribe of Mr. [Name] has ventured into Vanuatu. There are amazing tribes in the Vanuatu so that I have been excited on watching this program. Homework: 1)Emily said that Our teacher goes to Leipzig the day after . 2)Helen told me that he had been writing a letter the day before. 3)Robert told me that his father had flown to Dallas the year before. 4)Lisa said that Tim had gone to the stadium an hour ago. 5)Patricia said that her mother celebrates her birthday next weekend. . 6)Michael said to me that he reads a book this week. 7)Jason and Victoria told me that they do their best in the exams the day after. 8)Andrew remarked that we had never eaten fish two days after. 9)Alice complained that he had spent all his pocket money on Monday. 10)David said that John had alread gone at six.

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Hello Rooney^^HAPPY MONDAY!!^_^ Thank you so much for sending your homework^^ You did a good job but please be careful with the pronouns you use and the tenses of your verbs okay?^_^ T. Sally~ Hello Sally,TGIM! >>>CORRECTIn order that I can watch \"Runing man\" and \"the Law of Jungle\" which are my favorite program,I like Sunday of the weeks. >>>I like Sundays because I can watch my favorite programs which are, \" Running man\" and the \"Law of Jungle\".Recently, In the \"the Law of Jungle\", a tribe of Mr. [Name] has ventured into Vanuatu. >>>CORRECTThere are amazing tribes in the Vanuatu so that I have been excited on watching this program. >>>There are amazing tribes in the Vanuatu that\'s why I have been excited on watching this program.Homework:1)Emily said that Our teacher goes to Leipzig the day after . >>>Emily said that their teacher would go to Leipzig the next day.2)Helen told me that he had been writing a letter the day before. >>>Helen told me that she had been writing a letter the day before. 3)Robert told me that his father had flown to Dallas the year before. >>CORRECT4)Lisa said that Tim had gone to the stadium an hour ago. >>>CORRECT5)Patricia said that her mother celebrates her birthday next weekend. >>>Patricia said that her mother would celebrate her birthday the following weekend. 6)Michael said to me that he reads a book this week. >>>Michael said to me that he was going to read a book that week. 7)Jason and Victoria told me that they do their best in the exams the day after. >>>Jason and Victoria told me that they would do their best in the exams the next day. 8)Andrew remarked that we had never eaten fish two days after. >>>Andrew remarked that they hadn\'t eaten fish two days before. 9)Alice complained that he had spent all his pocket money on Monday. >>>Alice complained that she had spent all her pocket money on Monday. 10)David said that John had alread gone at six. >>>CORRECT

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