hi~ sheela~~

1. Mutable after president candidate was elected. there are many mutable things compared to campaign pledges. 2. Preamble preamble is the most important thing than anyother things in the interview. because the interviewer have to assess many candidates for a day 3. Nurture I always have dream of nurturing pats and i will do it

Hi!
So this is the continuation of your homework.^^
You certainly made short sentences earlier, which were all grammatically correct.
Now, what we have to focus on is your complex sentence construction.
Review the corrections, okay?
Have fun!
_T.Sheela^^
1. Mutable
after president candidate was elected.
there are many mutable things compared to campaign pledges.
>>After the presidential candidate was elected, there were more mutable things compared with the campaign pledges.
2. Preamble
preamble is the most important thing than anyother things in the interview.
because the interviewer have to assess many candidates for a day
>> A preamble is the most important thing in the interview because the interviewer has to assess many candidates in a day.
3. Nurture
I always have dream of nurturing pats and i will do it
>> I always dream of nurturing pets and so, I will do it.