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1. In the year 122 AD, the Roman Emperor Hadrian (visit) visited____his provinces in Britain.
2. On his visit, the Roman soldiers (tell)told ____him that Pictish tribes from Britain's north (attack) will attack____them.
3. So Hadrian (give) gave_____the order to build a protective wall across one of the narrowest parts of the country.
4. After 6 years of hard work, the Wall (finish) finished_____in 128.
5. It (be) was_____117 kilometres long and about 4 metres high
1. Where do___you live?
2. How _are___you?
3. When _do___they come to school?
4. Where _does___she work?
5. Why _does___Kim sad?
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Hello Charles,
Here are the correct answers and please give time to read and study your mistakes. See you tomorrow!
T.Sheela
1. In the year 122 AD, the Roman Emperor Hadrian (visit) visited____his provinces in Britain.
>>Correct!
2. On his visit, the Roman soldiers (tell)told ____him that Pictish tribes from Britain\'s north (attack) will attack____them.
>>On his visit, the Roman soldiers (tell)told ____him that Pictish tribes from Britain\'s north (attack) had attacked____them. 3. So Hadrian (give) gave_____the order to build a protective wall across one of the narrowest parts of the country.
>>Correct!4. After 6 years of hard work, the Wall (finish) finished_____in 128.
>>After 6 years of hard work, the Wall (finish) was finished__in 128. 5. It (be) was_____117 kilometres long and about 4 metres high
>>Correct!1. Where do___you live?
>>Correct!2. How _are___you?
>>Correct!3. When _do___they come to school?
>>Correct!4. Where _does___she work?
>>Correct!5. Why _does___Kim sad?
>>Why _is___Kim sad?
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