hi, shy

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Doni

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Today's my class was too short... I think you took fifteen minutes for ten. ^^ I'm sorry we did't have a plenty of time for English class. Please make sure the time. I like English and enjoy our conversation even if I'm a little nervous during the class.^&^ Today is 'cho-bok'day in korea. It means the first hottest day in summer. we have three days 'cho-bok','jung-bok' and 'mal-bok' during the summer. Interval of them may be ten days roughly. Korean have special healthful food 'sam-gye-tang'(like a chiken soup) in this day. As we eat special food don't cath a hot. It's the time-honored tradition. If you visited Korea someday I treat it to you. You will like this food. Good night,shy~~

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]!! Oh my gosh, I am really sorry.. I guess I got confuse with my clock, I will have it fixed right away.. I will extend our time tomorrow..^^I am really sorry.. Anyway, thank you so much for your offer of treating me.. I promise that if I go to Korea I will contact you so that you can treat me hehehe!! You have very interesting traditions in Korea, and I want to know more about that.. Maybe you can share it to me sometimes..Again, I am really sorry about the time.. And don’t feel nervous during the class, just relax.. You are doing great… T. Shy Today's my class was too short...  >> Today's class was too short... I think you took fifteen minutes for ten. ^^ >> I think you have mistaken fifteen minutes for ten…^^I'm sorry we did't have a plenty of time for English class. >> I'm sorry we didn't have plenty of time for English class.Please make sure the time. >> Please make sure of the time.I like English and enjoy our conversation even if I'm a little nervous during the class.^&^ >> I like English and I enjoy our conversation even if I'm a little nervous during the class.^&^Today is 'cho-bok'day in korea. >> Correct. Just capitalize “Korea”It means the first hottest day in summer.  >> Correctwe have three days 'cho-bok','jung-bok' and 'mal-bok' during the summer. >> CorrectInterval of them may be a month roughly.>> Interval between them is roughly a month Korean have special healthful food 'sam-gye-tang'(like a chiken soup)in this day. >> Koreans have special healthy food 'sam-gye-tang'(like a chicken soup) on this day.As we eat special food don't cath a hot. >> As we eat this special food, we don't feel hot.It's the time-honored tradition. >> It's a time-honored tradition.If you visited Korea someday I treat it to you. >> If you visited Korea someday I will treat you.You will like this food.>> CorrectGood night,shy~~ >> Correct

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