hi, shy
학생이 쓴 원문
Today's my class was too short...
I think you took fifteen minutes for ten. ^^
I'm sorry we did't have a plenty of time for English class.
Please make sure the time.
I like English and enjoy our conversation even if I'm a little nervous during the class.^&^
Today is 'cho-bok'day in korea.
It means the first hottest day in summer.
we have three days 'cho-bok','jung-bok' and 'mal-bok' during the summer.
Interval of them may be ten days roughly.
Korean have special healthful food 'sam-gye-tang'(like a chiken soup)
in this day.
As we eat special food don't cath a hot.
It's the time-honored tradition.
If you visited Korea someday I treat it to you.
You will like this food.
Good night,shy~~
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]!!
Oh my gosh, I am really sorry.. I guess I got confuse with my clock, I will have it fixed right away..
I will extend our time tomorrow..^^I am really sorry..
Anyway, thank you so much for your offer of treating me.. I promise that if I go to Korea I will contact you so that you can treat me hehehe!!
You have very interesting traditions in Korea, and I want to know more about that.. Maybe you can share it to me sometimes..Again, I am really sorry about the time.. And don’t feel nervous during the class, just relax.. You are doing great…
T. Shy
Today's my class was too short...
>> Today's class was too short... I think you took fifteen minutes for ten. ^^
>> I think you have mistaken fifteen minutes for ten…^^I'm sorry we did't have a plenty of time for English class.
>> I'm sorry we didn't have plenty of time for English class.Please make sure the time.
>> Please make sure of the time.I like English and enjoy our conversation even if I'm a little nervous during the class.^&^
>> I like English and I enjoy our conversation even if I'm a little nervous during the class.^&^Today is 'cho-bok'day in korea.
>> Correct. Just capitalize “Korea”It means the first hottest day in summer.
>> Correctwe have three days 'cho-bok','jung-bok' and 'mal-bok' during the summer.
>> CorrectInterval of them may be a month roughly.>> Interval between them is roughly a month
Korean have special healthful food 'sam-gye-tang'(like a chiken soup)in this day.
>> Koreans have special healthy food 'sam-gye-tang'(like a chicken soup) on this day.As we eat special food don't cath a hot.
>> As we eat this special food, we don't feel hot.It's the time-honored tradition.
>> It's a time-honored tradition.If you visited Korea someday I treat it to you.
>> If you visited Korea someday I will treat you.You will like this food.>> CorrectGood night,shy~~
>> Correct
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