Hi shy~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon Shy~
I'm very sleepy right now. hehe^^
Last week I already told you about my vacation plan.
I may be going to Germany in september.
Because my brother is living in there.
He went to there two and half years ago.
He is studying at college.
His majority is an architecture.
He said he was satisfied with his life in Germany
even though he had to study harder.
I have never gone to Europe, I hope to take a trip to Germany.
It will be very exciting and good experience.
p.s: I have a meeting again, tonight.
So I postpond the class. I'm sorry for that.
See you next day~
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]!!
I am sleepy right now too hahaha!! But it will be gone later on..
Anyway, yeah, I remember your plans in visiting Germany. I have never been to Europe as well… The farthest I’ve been to was Singapore..
You must really miss your brother. It will be a good thing to go there and visit him for a while.. I’m sure he misses you too..
I’ll see you tomorrow then!^^T. Shy
Good afternoon Shy~
>> Correct^^I'm very sleepy right now. hehe^^
>> Correct^^Last week I already told you about my vacation plan.
>> Correct^^I may be going to Germany in september.
>> I may be going to Germany in September. (Capitalize months)Because my brother is living in there.
>> Because my brother is living there.He went to there two and half years ago.
>> He went to there two and a half years ago.He is studying at college.
>> He is studying in college.His majority is an architecture.
>> His major is architecture.He said he was satisfied with his life in Germany
>> Correct^^even though he had to study harder.
>> Correct^^I have never gone to Europe, I hope to take a trip to Germany.
>> Correct^^It will be very exciting and good experience.
>> Correct^^p.s: I have a meeting again, tonight.
>> Correct^^So I postpond the class. I'm sorry for that.
>> So I postponed the class. I'm sorry for that.See you next day~
>> Correct^^
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