Hi teacher
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How have you learned the cooking skills that you have?
Acually, I didn\'t cook often before I got married. But I could learn how to cook from I live my mother- in -law for 2years. She liked cooking and She knew what she has to cook for our healty. Nowaday, we live far each other. But I know that healty foods are very important for us. So I learn in the online how to cook. In the old days, I cooked as my feeling, but nowaday I am trying to learn cooking. I knew what making big differnent tasty is to start from a little.
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Hi again [이름],
Thank you for diligently responding to the homework I am giving you. You are much appreciated for your effort and enthusiasm in doing them. ^ ^
-Rachel
Acually, I didn\'t cook often before I got married.
>> correct (we just spell actually as A-C-T-U-A-L-L-Y)
But I could learn how to cook from I live my mother- in -law for 2years.
>> But I learned how to cook from my mother-in-law when I lived with her for 2 years.
She liked cooking and She knew what she has to cook for our healty.
>> She likes cooking and she knows what to cook for our health.
Nowaday, we live far each other.
>> Nowadays, we live far from each other.
But I know that healty foods are very important for us. So I learn in the online how to cook.
>> But I know that healthy foods are important for us, so I learn online how to cook.
In the old days, I cooked as my feeling, but nowaday I am trying to learn cooking.
>> In the past, I cooked based on my feelings, but now, I am trying to learn how to cook.
I knew what making big differnent tasty is to start from a little.
>> I know that what makes a huge difference in the taste are the little things.
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