Hi teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to talk to you about my life. After school, I went to the study class that is near to my house. And I learned English. It is littel hard. But i must do this. All my friend go study class. And thank to teacked me. Bye
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Harry!^^
Thank you for sharing about your life. Yes, it\'s hard but think of it as a challenge so that after achieving it, it would be a great feeling of accomplishment. Just continue achieving it. It\'s my pleasure to help you improve your English skills.
I want to talk to you about my life.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> I want to share a story of my life to you.
After school, I went to the study class that is near to my house. And I learned English.
>>> After school, I go to a study class near my house and I\'m learning English.
It is littel hard. But i must do this.
>>>It is a little hard but I must do this.
All my friend go study class.
>>>All of my friends go to that study class.
And thank to teacked me.
>>>Thank you for teaching me.
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