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What help, if any, should governments give to help the establishment of renewable energy production?
What ist the renewable energy? I don\'t know what it is. But I interested in Green energy just like the solar energy and wind energy. Have you watched the movie called The Martian. The hero who be left in Mars alone use the solar energy to move a lot of things. As I watch the movie, I thought it is our future. We will use solar energy in the future. But I already can see it anywhere around me. Fortunatly, Our goverment wants to decrase carbon emission. And to develop industrial of grean energy, they make many laws and they try to apply a lot of fund.
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Hello [이름],
You asked a good question. Renewable energy is green energy. Renewable energy is energy that is collected from natural sources such as sunlight, wind, rain, tides, waves and geothermal heat. They are called renewable because they are supposed to be unlimited, so if they are used up, they can be replenished or changed with the same kind. I hope my explanation is clear. ^ ^ Oh by the way, yeah. I watched the movie, The Martian. It is an interesting movie!
-Rachel
What ist the renewable energy? I don\'t know what it is.
>> What is renewable energy because I don\'t know what it is?
But I interested in Green energy just like the solar energy and wind energy.
>> But I am interested in green energy such as energy from the sun and the wind.
Have you watched the movie called The Martian.
>> Have you watched the movie called, The Martian?
The hero who be left in Mars alone use the solar energy to move a lot of things.
>> The hero who was left in Mars alone used solar energy to move a lot of things.
As I watch the movie, I thought it is our future.
>> As I watched the movie, I thought that could be our future.
We will use solar energy in the future. But I already can see it anywhere around me.
>> correct
Fortunatly, Our goverment wants to decrase carbon emission. And to develop industrial of grean energy, they make many laws and they try to apply a lot of fund.
>> Fortunately, our government wants to decrease carbon emission and develop the industry of renewable energy by making many laws and providing a lot of funds.
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