Hi, Teacher~~
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If you have time to paint a picture to describe the world\'s situation, what image or picture would you paint?
Good night Teacher~ I have forgotten my homework so I am writing it very sort. This subjects which give me are always interesting. It make me be thinking in English.
If I have time to paint a picture to describe the world\'s situation, I will paint such like foggy day. Because we don\'t know our tommorrow.... But I think there is a hope to the world. So I will paint a heart too in my canvas^^ .
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Hi Again [이름],
Wow, you are on a roll today! You are doing one homework after another. Thank you for diligently doing them. ^ ^
-Rachel
I have forgotten my homework so I am writing it very sort.
>> I have forgotten my homework, so I am writing it very shortly.
This subjects which give me are always interesting.
>> The topics you give me are always interesting.
It make me be thinking in English.
>> They make me think in English.
If I have time to paint a picture to describe the world\'s situation, I will paint such like foggy day.
If I have time to paint a picture to describe the world\'s situation, I will paint such like foggy day.
>> If I have time to paint a picture to describe the world\'s situation, I will paint something like a foggy day.
Because we don\'t know our tommorrow.... But I think there is a hope to the world.
>> Because we don\'t know about our tomorrow, but I think there is hope for the world.
So I will paint a heart too in my canvas^^ .
>> correct (awesome sentence)
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