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2020-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

학생이 쓴 원문

I like: 1. They have a lots of building. 2.I can have many experience. 3. That place have many Tourism Area Don\'t like. 1. So many cars and people. 2. What place is smaller then other place. 3. That place is very complicated.

강사 첨삭

Hello Harry!^^

Thank you for doing your homework today. Good job!^_^

I like: 1. They have a lots of building.
>>>I like that there are a lot of buildings.

2.I can have many experience.
>>>I can have many experiences.

3. That place have many Tourism Area
>>>That place have a lot of tourist spots.
Don\'t like. 1. So many cars and people.
>>>I don\'t like so many cars and people.

2. What place is smaller then other place.
>>>The spaces are smaller than others.

3. That place is very complicated.
>>>CORRECT!

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