Hi Teacher~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Are you interested in fashion? How do you know what is in fashion and what is out of fashion?
Yes, I am. I am iterested in fashion. It is important for me.. Because I meet student\'s parents often. And I like to wear with changing my clothes everyday. Sometimes I am not satisfied my fashion style, I feel like I don\'t want to work the day. For my style, I like how I obstact charactors on TV. When I watch TV show, I could know trendy fashion style. I can know what is in fashion and what is out of fashion. And a fashion magazine is the most to know fashion style lately.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]! The way we dress for the day can affect our mood. You are right about what you said. It is very relatable. We have to choose clothes that empower us. I hope you\'re wearing your favorite pieces of clothing today. See you in our next class!~~T.Dee
>>Yes, I am. I am interested in fashion.
It is important for me.
>>CORRECT!
Because I meet student\'s parents often.
>>It\'s because I meet my student\'s parents often.
And I like to wear with changing my clothes everyday.
>>Also, I like to change the clothes that I wear everyday.
Sometimes I am not satisfied my fashion style, I feel like I don\'t want to work the day.
>>Sometimes, when I am not satisfied with my fashion style, I feel like I don\'t want to work on that day.
For my style, I like how I obstact charactors on TV.
>>For my style, I like observing characters on TV.
When I watch TV show, I could know trendy fashion style.
>>When I watch a TV show, I could know the trendy fashion style.
I can know what is in fashion and what is out of fashion.
>>CORRECT!
And a fashion magazine is the most to know fashion style lately.
>>And, of course, a fashion magazine is the most common way to know about the latest fashion style.
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