Hi teacher~
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I\'ll play many VR games.
Because in the future the Game is more develop.
And and i\'ll meet me in the future, and see my futures son.
강사 첨삭
Hello Harry!^^
You answered the essay homework question well. Just remember that \"I\" is always capitalized in a sentence. ^_^
I\'ll play many VR games.
>>> I play many VR games.
Because in the future the Game is more develop.
Because in the future the Game is more develop.
>>>It\'s because in the future, the games will be more developed.
And and i\'ll meet me in the future, and see my futures son.
>>> Also, I want to see my future self and son.
And and i\'ll meet me in the future, and see my futures son.
>>> Also, I want to see my future self and son.
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