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2020-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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I\'don\'t like hairy clothes. But my mom is like hairy clothes. So i told her i\'d never take this clothes. But i put this clothes. Because my mom said you should obayed my order

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Hello again, Harry!^^
I\'m happy to see that you\'re practicing your grammar and writing skills. Very good! Just be mindful of the punctuation marks. ^_^

I\'don\'t like hairy clothes. But my mom is like hairy clothes. 
>>> I don\'t like furry clothes, but my mom likes it. 
So i told her i\'d never take this clothes. But i put this clothes.
>>> So, I told her I\'d never take those clothes but I put them on.
>>> So, I told her I\'d never take those clothes but I still wear them
Because my mom said you should obayed my order.
>>>It because my mom said that I should obey her orders.

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