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One day i promise go out and played my friends. But today is my game time so i played game with my brother. So i break it my promise.
So i fell worryed
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You are doing a good job by answering your homework questions, Harry. Keep it up!^_^
One day i promise go out and played my friends. But today is my game time so i played game with my brother.
>>> One day, I promised to go out and play with my friends but today is my game time, so I played with my brother instead.
So i break it my promise.
>>>I broke my promise.
So i fell worryed
So i fell worryed
>>> Now, I\'m worried.
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