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I like movie better.Because the book is little boring. But movie have a tension and it very fun. But the book have many letters.
But i like History book and seince book.
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Nice one, Harry! You were able to make four homework today and that\'s a great way to practice your grammar and writing skill. Continue doing them. Enjoy your weekend!^_^
I like movie better.Because the book is little boring.
>>> I like movies better because books are a little boring.
But movie have a tension and it very fun.
>>> I like movies better because books are a little boring.
But movie have a tension and it very fun.
>>>Movies have more tensions and more fun.
But the book have many letters.
>>>However, books have many letters where I can learn more.
But i like History book and seince book.
>>>I like reading History and Science books.
But i like History book and seince book.
>>>I like reading History and Science books.
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