Hi teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
When i was young, i enjoyed summer. Because we can go to the swimming pool.
And We can eat many ice cream. And i don\'t like thick clothes. And i love cool food.
But one thing i don\'t like is the electric tax is so many
강사 첨삭
Thank you for answering your homework questions last weekend. Continue practicing your English skill. The pronoun \"I\" is always capitalized, no matter where it falls in a line.
When i was young, i enjoyed summer. Because we can go to the swimming pool.
>>> When I was young, I enjoyed the summer because I can go to the swimming pool.
And We can eat many ice cream. And i don\'t like thick clothes. And i love cool food.
>>> I can eat a lot of ice cream because I love cool food and I don\'t like wearing thick clothes.
>>> When I was young, I enjoyed the summer because I can go to the swimming pool.
And We can eat many ice cream. And i don\'t like thick clothes. And i love cool food.
>>> I can eat a lot of ice cream because I love cool food and I don\'t like wearing thick clothes.
But one thing i don\'t like is the electric tax is so many
>>> One more thing, I don\'t like high electricity tax.
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