Hi Teacher~~^^
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I wonder if I make sentences correctly about your question. There are many students who have dreams which is different from each other in my art class. So it depends on the students mostly. They tend to want to draw. Because some of students want to be a chactor designer and some of students want to be a painter. But first of all, how to teach and my strategy is same to everyone. It is practicing basic skill. Although they would be cliche, I consider how to teach not to bored.^^
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Hello Miss [이름]! I can tell that you made mostly correct sentences. It\'s a good effort to write them down so we can inspect them better. Check below for my corrections. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>I wonder if I made my sentences correctly when I answered your question.
There are many students who have dreams which is different from each other in my art class.
>>There are many students in my art class who have dreams which are different from each other.
So it depends on the students mostly.
>>CORRECT!
They tend to want to draw.
>>CORRECT!
Because some of students want to be a chactor designer and some of students want to be a painter.
>>Some of my students want to be animators and some wants to be a painter.
But first of all, how to teach and my strategy is same to everyone.
>>How I teach and the strategy that I use the is same with everyone.
It is practicing basic skill.
>>CORRECT!
Although they would be cliche, I consider how to teach not to bored.^^
>>Although it\'s a cliche, I try to teach students without boring them.^^
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