Hi teacher~
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I will be more than happy to read your composition and correct the errors for you.
Is quality important to you? Why or why not?
It\'s important. Because if the quality is bad the toy or everything is eazilily broke.
And the quality is important for selling people,.
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Thank you for answering your homework question, Harry!^^
It\'s important. Because if the quality is bad the toy or everything is eazilily broke.
>>>It\'s important because if the quality of a toy is bad, it will break easily.
And the quality is important for selling people,.
>>>And quality is important for costumers.
>>>It\'s important because if the quality of a toy is bad, it will break easily.
And the quality is important for selling people,.
>>>And quality is important for costumers.
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