Hi Teacher~~

2020-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Are you good at telling jokes? If not, why not Good afternoon teacher~I am working on 2jobs. Nowaday I attend the company in the morning twice a week. So I need to change my schedule. But you don\'t have any time in the afternoon so I have to study another teacher. The one of my bad thing is I don\'t like to assoiate with people. Besides, I think I am not good at telling jokes. I have thought that it is too waste to have meeting people at night. Sometimes I think there might be dutch people or German among my ancestor. As far as I concerned, they are efficient and puntual. I think I am very honestly. But I need to have a time to give a jokes for people who is close to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this.

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Are you good at telling jokes? If not, why not

>>> correct (Are you good at telling jokes? If not, why not?)
Good afternoon teacher~

>>> correct

I am working on 2jobs.

>>> correct ( I am working on 2 jobs. )

Nowaday I attend the company in the morning twice a week.

>>> Nowadays, I attend the company in the morning twice a week.

So I need to change my schedule.

>>> correct

But you don\'t have any time in the afternoon so I have to study another teacher.
>>> But you don\'t have any time in the afternoon so I have to study with another teacher.
The one of my bad thing is I don\'t like to assoiate with people.

>>> One of my weaknesses is I don\'t like to associate with people.

Besides, I think I am not good at telling jokes.

>>> correct

I have thought that it is too waste to have meeting people at night.

>>> I have thought that it is such a waste to ne meeting people at night.

Sometimes I think there might be dutch people or German among my ancestor.

>>> Sometimes, I think there might be Dutch people or Germans among my ancestors.

As far as I concerned, they are efficient and puntual.

>>> As far as I am concerned, they are efficient and punctual.

I think I am very honestly.

>>> I think I am very honest.

But I need to have a time to give a jokes for people who is close to me.

>>> But I need to have time to give jokes to people who are close to me.

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