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Many people interested in a well-being life. So they tend to get organic foods. When my child was young, I tried to use materials in oranic. But recently, I can\'t believe if the true or false. Actually I feel that oranic food delicious
★Do you like horror movies? Why or why not? If so, what’s your favorite scary movie?
INo, I don\'t. It\'s because whenever I watch I feel very dirty. The movie I watched when I was young has some reason for kill somebody. But current horror movie has no reason about killing. Most of all, zombie movie that is in trend these days is very terrible.^^
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Hello Miss [이름]! Having a good well-being is what everyone wants but it\'s not easy to achieve. It\'s good that you are trying healthy alternative food for your family. And, don\'t worry about disliking horror movies. It\'s not everyone\'s cup of tea. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>Many people interested to have a good well-being in life.
So they tend to get organic foods.
>>CORRECT!
When my child was young, I tried to use materials in oranic.
>>When my child was young, I tried to use organic materials.
But recently, I can\'t believe if the true or false. Actually I feel that oranic food delicious
>>But recently, I\'m not sure what to believe in. For now, I actual feel that organic food is delicious.
>>But recently, I\'m not sure what to believe in. For now, I actual feel that organic food is delicious.
No, I don\'t.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s because whenever I watch I feel very dirty.
>>CORRECT!
>>OR: It\'s because whenever I watch horror movies, I feel uncomfortable.
The movie I watched when I was young has some reason for kill somebody.
>>The movie I watched when I was young is about a person who wants to kill somebody.
But current horror movie has no reason about killing.
>>But currently, horror movies don\'t have the same idea.
Most of all, zombie movie that is in trend these days is very terrible.^^
>>Most of all, a zombie movie, which is trending these days, is very terrible.
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