Hi teacher~
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I will be more than happy to read your composition and correct the errors for you.
What countries would you like to travel to for a vacation? Why?
I want to go Russia with my family. Because we can see the ballet performance.
And we can eat the sheep meat. We can enjoyed the ski
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Hello Harry, you were able to practice your writing skills and that\'s a very good to enhance your English skills. keep on doing that!^_^
I want to go Russia with my family. Because we can see the ballet performance.
>>> I want to go Russia with my family because we can see ballet performances.
And we can eat the sheep meat. We can enjoyed the ski
>>> We can also eat lamb and enjoy skiing there.
And we can eat the sheep meat. We can enjoyed the ski
>>> We can also eat lamb and enjoy skiing there.
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