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Some people decorate their house to celebrate Halloween. Do you decorate your home to celebrate any special days?
There are many private institute close to my house. They always decorate their classroom whenever Halloween. And they spend enjoyed the time with taking a picture or eating some snacks. The students usually attend the classroom everyday. So they are waiting for the day due to it is a day which is no studying. But students in my art class qttend two a week or onces a week. So I can\'t get their schedule and they like to draw pictures more then eating. Besides I don\'t like the Halloween\'s mood. However I try to decorate for Christmas to celebrate the day.^^
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Hello Miss [이름]! I think Halloween is not for everybody. It\'s good to know that some kids get to have a little bit of fun during Halloween. Christmas is almost coming up and I know that you\'ll have a great time. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>There are many private institutes close to my house.
They always decorate their classroom whenever Halloween.
>>They always decorate their classrooms whenever it\'s Halloween.
And they spend enjoyed the time with taking a picture or eating some snacks.
>>They enjoy spending time together, taking pictures, or eating some snacks.
The students usually attend the classroom everyday.
>>The students usually attend classes everyday.
So they are waiting for the day due to it is a day which is no studying.
>>They are waiting for the day to come because it is a day of no studying.
But students in my art class qttend two a week or onces a week.
>>Students in my art class attend classes once or twice a week.
So I can\'t get their schedule and they like to draw pictures more then eating.
>>I can\'t decide their schedule and they like to draw pictures more then eating.
Besides I don\'t like the Halloween\'s mood.
>>CORRECT!
However I try to decorate for Christmas to celebrate the day.^^
>>CORRECT!
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