Hi teacher~
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1: When the some one in love.\'
2:When the some one have a shy thing.
3: When my brother have a importent secert.
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Hello Harry!^^
Good job in answering your homework question. Keep it up!^^
1: When the some one in love.\'
>>>1. It\'s good to keep a secret when someone told me he\'s in love.
2:When the some one have a shy thing.
>>>1. It\'s good to keep a secret when someone told me he\'s in love.
2:When the some one have a shy thing.
>>>2. It\'s good to keep a secret when someone is shy.
3: When my brother have a importent secert.
>>>3. It\'s good to keep a secret when my brother told me an important thing that I should keep.
3: When my brother have a importent secert.
>>>3. It\'s good to keep a secret when my brother told me an important thing that I should keep.
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