Hi teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
Growing up can be hard. Is there an age you didn’t enjoy? Give more details.
Yes i have an age i didn\'t enjoy.
It\'s 9yers old. Because me school teacher is very scared. And she gave our for many homework.
And i don\'t have many friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello Harry,
You were able to practice your writing skills and that\'s very good. Keep it up!^^
Yes i have an age i didn\'t enjoy.
>>> Yes, there\'s an age I didn\'t enjoy.
It\'s 9yers old. Because me school teacher is very scared. And she gave our for many homework.
>>>It\'s when I was 9 years old because my school teacher was very scary and gave us much homework.
And i don\'t have many friends.
>>I also didn\'t have many friends.
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