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What is your favorite hobby and why?
My favorite hobby is playing soccer with my friends.
Because i love playing ball. And i like play with my all friends!
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Hi [이름] YOON - HO
Because i love playing ball. And i like play with my all friends!
How was your day today. I hope you are doing fine! Take care of yourself ^^
What is your favorite hobby and why?
My favorite hobby is playing soccer with my friends.
My favorite hobby is playing soccer with my friends.
>> CORRECT
Because i love playing ball. And i like play with my all friends!
>> Because I love playing with balls and I like to play with my friends.
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