Hi teacher
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I always do eat cake Because it\'s Christmas.
And we will go the cerch. Because we are Cristian.
And we have a party 🥳 it\'s my Mather birthday.
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Hello Harry!^^
And we will go the cerch. Because we are Cristian.
>>>We also go to the church because we are Christians.
And we have a party 🥳 it\'s my Mather birthday.
Thank you for doing your homework. Keep practicing your writing and grammar skills. ^_^
Ialways do eat cake Because it\'s Christmas.
>>>I always eat cakes because it\'s Christmas.And we will go the cerch. Because we are Cristian.
>>>We also go to the church because we are Christians.
And we have a party 🥳 it\'s my Mather birthday.
>>>We have a party and it\'s also my mother\'s birthday.
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