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2020-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

My phone and my family is makes me happy. My phone is playing game with me. And my family is loved me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Harry! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job. Keep up the good work.

Here are your corrections:

My phone and my family is makes me happy.
>> My phone and my family makes me happy.

My phone is playing game with me.
>> I play games using my phone.

And my family is loved me.
>> My family loves me.

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