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2021-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Yes i compatithon with my brother in the game. Because i said you are no good at this game! So my brother is angry. So we bet each other

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Yes i compatithon with my brother in the game.Because i said you are no good at this game!

>> Yes, I compete with my brother in games because I told him that he is not good at the game.

So my brother is angry. So we bet each other

>> So, my brother got angry and he asked me to have a bet.

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