Hi teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes you happy?
My family makes me happy. because i alwayse played with my brother.
And my mother hugs me. And sleep with me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Harry! ^^
Thank you for doing your homework~
Thank you for doing your homework~
I think you are a very good brother and son. ^^
Your parents must be proud of you!
Your parents must be proud of you!
- T. Rina
1. My family makes me happy. because i alwayse played with my brother.
>> My family makes me happy because I always play with my brother.
2. And my mother hugs me. And sleep with me.
>> And my mother hugs me and sleeps with me.
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