Hi teacher~
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Why do you it is fun to play computer games?
Because i can speak anther people with chat.
It makes me fun. And i love computer games when i was young
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] YOON HO
It makes me fun. And i love computer games when i was young
Thank you for doing your composition. Have a nice day and until next time ^^
T. DON
Why do you think it is fun to play computer games?
Because i can speak anther people with chat.
Because i can speak anther people with chat.
>> I can express myself more when I chat with another person.
It makes me fun. And i love computer games when i was young
>> It is fun to play computer games because it is fun and I love playing computer games when I was young.
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