Hi teacher~

2021-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

What are some things you like to do on your birthday? I like playing game with my friends. And i want to eat many delicious food. And i like to eat cake.

강사 첨삭

It was your birthday recently, Harry! ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me.

See you again!

- T. Rina

1. I like playing game with my friends.

>> I like playing games with my friends.

2. And i want to eat many delicious food.

>> And I want to eat many delicious foods.

3. And i like to eat cake.

>> CORRECT!

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