Hi teacher~
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My hobby is reading books and watching phone.
And exercise in outside. exercise is very good for health.
And reading book is good for my future.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Harry! ^_^
Thank you for this. ^_^
Thank you for this. ^_^
- T. Rina
1. My hobby is reading books and watching phone.
>> My hobbies are reading books and using my phone.
2. And exercise in outside.
>> And exercising outside.
3. exercise is very good for health.
>> Exercise is very good for health.
4. And reading book is good for my future.
>> And reading books is good for my future.
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