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2012-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer. Good neighbor....hum... it make me consider about that's meanings. befor the my opinion, there is something to tell you about Koreans culture. I'm not sure. You are know the world " jung [정]' this world simular with world 'suman emotion' As I know, most foreigner do not understood that meanig 정[jung] for example, there is one poor woman who suddenly crash down. that town ,where she live, is pool too. But, she can survive . How? the reason is. one neighbors gave her a carrot. the other neighbors gave rice handful. like this. ...can you understand? to expaing 정 is very difficult because that word exist only korea. SO, my answer is this. good neighbor is someone has 정. because, Korean forget '정'becameing modernizating, . So, 정 is answer.

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Hello Su [이름]! Thank you for answering the homework. Again, don\'t forget to review the corrections that I\'ve made. Continue practicing. Teacher Michelle   Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.Good neighbor....hum... it make me consider about that\'s meanings. >> Good neighbor....hum... it makes me consider about it\'s real meaning. befor the my opinion, there is something to tell you about Koreans culture. >> Before I give my opinion, there is something I want to tell you about Korean culture.I\'m not sure. >> Correct >> or I\'m not sure about this. You are know the world \" jung [정]\' this world simular with world \'suman emotion\' >> Do you know the word \"jung [정],\" this word may similarly mean \"someone with emotion.\"As I know, most foreigner do not understood that meanig 정[jung] >> With what I know, most foreigners do not understood that meaning of \"정[jung].\"for example, there is one poor woman who suddenly crash down. >> For example, there\'s a poor woman who went into a crash while in town.that town ,where she live, is pool too. >> This town, where she lives, had many people who could be too busy to help her.But, she can survive . >> But she can survive. How? >> Correct! the reason is. one neighbors gave her a carrot. the other neighbors gave rice handful. like this. >> The reason is, one neighbor gave her a carrot while the others gave her a handful of rice....can you understand? to expaing 정 is very difficult because that word exist only korea. >> Can you understand? To explain \"정\" is very difficult because the word exists only in Korea.SO, my answer is this. good neighbor is someone has 정. >> So my answer is this: A good neighbor is someone who has \"정.\"because, Korean forget \'정\'becameing modernizating, . >> Sometimes Koreans forget about \"정\" because everything is modernized.So, 정 is answer. >> But still, a good neigbor is \"정.\"  

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