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How did you get your name?
I don\'t know who made my name. But my name is very different from my sisters\'s name. So I asume that my parents felt so happy about getting me. Even if I feel like my sisters are one team, I love my name. Also, I am the youngest of them so I can endure this situation. :)
My first son\'s name named after a popular singer in Korea at that time. I named his name. Because I loved the singer who was very hansome. He was good at dancing,too. Whenever I find out same name among my son\'s friends, I have a fun. What is the reason they named just like that? I kind of expect that even if my son is not a good dancer and singing, he will be a great scientist.:)
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Hello, Miss [이름]!
Thank you for answering this question, I am always curious about the origin of people\'s names. I hope you were able to check out the corrections I made.
Keep up the hard work!
-Teacher Violet.
I don\'t know who made my name.
>> CORRECT!
But my name is very different from my sisters\'s name.
>> (Did you mean 1 sister) But my name is very different from my sister\'s name.
>> (or many sisters?) But my name is very different from that of my sister\'s.
So I asume that my parents felt so happy about getting me.
>> So I assume that my parents felt so happy about having me.
Even if I feel like my sisters are one team, I love my name.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Even if I feel like me and my sisters are one team, I love my name.
Also, I am the youngest of them so I can endure this situation. :)
>> CORRECT!
My first son\'s name named after a popular singer in Korea at that time.
>> My son is names after a popular singer in Korea at that time.
I named his name. Because I loved the singer who was very hansome.
>> I gave his name because I loved the singer who was very handsome.
He was good at dancing,too.
>> He was good at dancing too.
Whenever I find out same name among my son\'s friends, I have a fun.
>> Whenever I find out that there is a same name among my son\'s friends, I feel happy.
What is the reason they named just like that?
>> What is the reason they named him just like that?
I kind of expect that even if my son is not a good dancer and singing, he will be a great scientist.:)
>> I kind of expect that even if my son is not a good dancer and singer, he will be a great scientist.:)
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