Hi ! teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
hi~!!
Today, I really felt lack of my grammer ability because i couldn't explain you my opinion exactly.
when will be the time that i'll be able to tell you the perfect story? ㅠㅠ
Since i 'm working, i don't have enough time to watch english drama or something. Anyway, it's an excuse, i know.
i'll buy english books todat on my way.
Every time i feel thank you for your tution. thnks~
I'll study english really hard.
bye~have a great weekend~
강사 첨삭
I was very glad seeing your message... Anyway with all the advices i've given you, I think you just have to keep the enthusiasm and that is one of the greatest tool you could have to improve. Don't be impatient, just do your best and in time you'll adopt the english that you wanted. You're idea is nice. Buy some books that you could read while you're at your office and not doing anything.
Here are some of the Corrections you have to make from your composition:
* i really felt
- I really feel
* mi'll buy english books today on my way
- On my way, I'll buy english books that I could use for studying..
* i feel thank you for your tution
- I feel thankful for your advices
SEE YA!
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