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The most memorable place I have been to is Ny. I had a dream that was in NY at christmas and new years day. Probably most of women have a dream like me. So I planned to go to ny, and finally I achieved my dream. I went to Ny with my friend in 2010. we took a bus from Toronto to Ny. It took for about 10hours. Before taking the bus, we thought that It is such a long trip, and we could be exhausted tired and bored for 10hours in the bus. But we were student and didn’t have much money to take flight, that’s why we chose to take the bus. Then, we used the bus at night, we could sleep all night. After waking up, it was already the morning. I thought that NY city would be energetic and exciting at Christmas season. All of the store would turn on carol song and there would be many Santa clauses at Time square. However, there was nothing. My dream was gone. I have never heard the christmas song and never seen Santa claus. After that I heard they spend time with family at Christmas season.

Happy Friday to you! When I was reading your composition, I was smiling because what happened to you happened to me as well.^^ Sometimes it is really not good to expect because when our expectations aren\'t met, we will surely be disappointed. But anyway, thumbs up with your composition. Keep up the good work!^_^ Enjoy the day and keep smiling!   T. Valery^_^ Here are my corrections for you: The most memorable place I have been to is Ny. >>Correct! OR >>The most memorable place I have been to is New York. I had a dream that was in NY at christmas and new years day. >>My dream is to be in New York during Christmas and New Year\'s Day. Probably most of women have a dream like me. >>Probably, most women dream to go to New York during holidays like me. So I planned to go to ny, and finally I achieved my dream. >>So when I went to New York, I finally achieved my dream. OR >>So when I went to New York, my dream finally came true. I went to Ny with my friend in 2010. >>I went to New York with my friend in 2010. we took a bus from Toronto to Ny. >>We took a bus from Toronto to New York. It took for about 10hours. >>We traveled for about 10 hours. Before taking the bus, we thought that It is such a long trip, and we could be exhausted tired and bored for 10hours in the bus. >>Before our trip, we were already aware that it will be a long trip and surely we will be bored and tired inside the bus. But we were student and didn’t have much money to take flight, that’s why we chose to take the bus. >>But since we were still students, we didn\'t have enough money to travel through airplane so we decided to travel through a bus instead. Then, we used the bus at night, we could sleep all night. >>We decided then to travel at night for us to sleep during the trip but unfortunately we didn\'t sleep very well. After waking up, it was already the morning. >>When we woke up, it was already morning. I thought that NY city would be energetic and exciting at Christmas season. >>I thought New York is exciting and lively during Christmas season. All of the store would turn on carol song and there would be many Santa clauses at Time square. >>Where in all the stores will be playing Christmas carols and there will be images of Santa Clause in Time Square. However, there was nothing. >>But I didn\'t see or hear anything. My dream was gone. >>I was disappointed. I have never heard the christmas song and never seen Santa claus. >>I never heard any Christmas songs or see Santa Clause. After that I heard they spend time with family at Christmas season. >>After that, I then preferred to spend the Christmas season with my family.