Hi~ teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
I forgot fo call the manager.
today the thought suddenly hit me.
So I called the office manager.
He said " the file you downloaded is right."
I said " but it start chaper10 not chaper1"
He said "yes, you are a middle level. so textbook starts chap.10"
I said " but my teacher has another text book"
He said " oh? then I'll check it"
Maybe He is going to talk to you about text book.
Anway tomorrow I'll download the text book whether it is right or wrong.
강사 첨삭
I forgot fo call the manager.
>>> GREAT sentence.
today the thought suddenly hit me.
>>> Today, the thought suddenly hit me.( I like the way you said it)
So I called the office manager.
>>> Correct sentence.
He said " the file you downloaded is right."
>>> He said," the file I downloaded is right."
I said " but it start chaper10 not chaper1"
>>> I said," the books starts in Chapter 10 and not chapter 1."
He said "yes, you are a middle level. so textbook starts chap.10"
>>> He said," Yes, I'm a middle level student so, the textbook starts in chapter 10."
I said " but my teacher has another text book"
>>> I said, " but my teacher has another textbook." ( correct sentence)
He said " oh? then I'll check it"
>>> He said," Oh, then I'll check it." ( good conversation with the manager)
Maybe He is going to talk to you about text book.
>>> Maybe he's going to talk to you about the textbook.(Excellent)
Anway tomorrow I'll download the text book whether it is right or wrong
>>> Anyway, tomorrow I'll download the textbook whether it is right or wrong. ( kkk, you are really a good student. You follow your teacher's instruction. I like that. Yes. Just download the material and whatever you have downloaded, we will check it and I'll adjust for you.OK?)
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