hi teacher :)

2011-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Have you good lunch Lei :)? Questions. 1) I have to money and time for traveling. but, I have spent my money on drinks. Because I had many appointments due to year-end and New year's. And I'm really busy these days. Because I study English and I go to school to TOEIC class. So, I can't hardly travel these days. 2) I walked with my sister's dog on the roof. The dog had a car accident around a year ago. Then, he is scared of crowed place. So, I should go quiet place with him. (like on the roof) But, he is getting better. 3) thank you for listening

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Hi [이름]!!! It's sad to hear about the story of your sister's dog. I love dogs have I told you that before? I hope that your dog will get better soon. And good job with your composition though I made some revisions with some of your sentences. Please check on them. Lei J Have you good lunch Lei :)? >>Did you enjoy your lunch Lei? Questions. 1) I have to money and time for traveling. >>I have no money and time for traveling. but, I have spent my money on drinks. >>correct Because I had many appointments due to year-end and New year's. >>Because I had a lot of appointment because of the year-end and New year celebration. And I'm really busy these days. >>correct Because I study English and I go to school to TOEIC class. >>Because I study English thru phone and I attend TOEIC classes. So, I can't hardly travel these days. >>correct 2)I walked with my sister's dog on the roof. >>correct The dog had a car accident around a year ago. >>correct Then, he is scared of crowed place. >>Then he got scared of going to crowded places. >>Then he got a phobia with crowded places. So, I should go quiet place with him. (like on the roof) >>So I need to go to a quiet place with him (like on the roof) But, he is getting better. >>correct 3) thank you for listening >>correct

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