hi teacher :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you good lunch Lei :)?
Questions.
1)
I have to money and time for traveling.
but, I have spent my money on drinks.
Because I had many appointments due to year-end and New year's.
And I'm really busy these days.
Because I study English and I go to school to TOEIC class.
So, I can't hardly travel these days.
2)
I walked with my sister's dog on the roof.
The dog had a car accident around a year ago.
Then, he is scared of crowed place.
So, I should go quiet place with him. (like on the roof)
But, he is getting better.
3) thank you for listening
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! It's sad to hear about the story of your sister's dog. I love dogs have I told you that before? I hope that your dog will get better soon. And good job with your composition though I made some revisions with some of your sentences. Please check on them.
Lei J
Have you good lunch Lei :)?
>>Did you enjoy your lunch Lei?
Questions.
1) I have to money and time for traveling.
>>I have no money and time for traveling.
but, I have spent my money on drinks.
>>correct
Because I had many appointments due to year-end and New year's.
>>Because I had a lot of appointment because of the year-end and New year celebration.
And I'm really busy these days.
>>correct
Because I study English and I go to school to TOEIC class.
>>Because I study English thru phone and I attend TOEIC classes.
So, I can't hardly travel these days.
>>correct
2)I walked with my sister's dog on the roof.
>>correct
The dog had a car accident around a year ago.
>>correct
Then, he is scared of crowed place.
>>Then he got scared of going to crowded places.
>>Then he got a phobia with crowded places.
So, I should go quiet place with him. (like on the roof)
>>So I need to go to a quiet place with him (like on the roof)
But, he is getting better.
>>correct
3) thank you for listening
>>correct
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