Hi, Teacher!

2014-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Well...I would like to define myself as a person who really likes to put one hundered percent efforts into what I like to do, which indirectly implies I'm not a typical man. The typical person, I think, is the anyone who wants to live well without any specific goal, but I have one. Besides, I really love experiencing what I have never tried to do before, so I'm always thirsty in looking for something extraordinary, say, exploring or surviving in the midst of a jungle. Living as a man can be extremely difficult because there are always some limitations to achieve what he or she wants. However, overcoming them can also be the excellent ways to live as a conspicuous person, I think. Before wrapping up my words, I would like to mention this: Don't waste your time looking for what you can't fulfill, rather, what you are capable of accomplishing now. Hi, Camille. Today, I'm so flattered by your compliements!^^ Thank you for it and have a nice evening!zz

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear [이름]!

Happy Monday!

It is always my pleasure being your teacher, I hope you know that. You are amazing. I don\'t know but I can\'t really find any corrections to modify while having your class. I hope you will keep up the good work my dear. And if you do have some suggestion just let me know okie? I am just so happy that I am helping you in some ways too.

Please take care of yourself and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Well...I would like to define myself as a person who really likes to put one hundered percent efforts into what I like to do, which indirectly implies I\'m not a typical man.

>>correct

OR: Observe the proper spelling of the word HUNDRED.

The typical person, I think, is the anyone who wants to live well without any specific goal, but I have one.

>>The typical person, I think, is anyone who wants to live well without any specific goal, but I have one.

Besides, I really love experiencing what I have never tried to do before, so I\'m always thirsty in looking for something extraordinary, say, exploring or surviving in the midst of a jungle.

>>correct

Living as a man can be extremely difficult because there are always some limitations to achieve what he or she wants.

>>correct

However, overcoming them can also be the excellent ways to live as a conspicuous person, I think.

>>correct

Before wrapping up my words, I would like to mention this:

>>correct

Don\'t waste your time looking for what you can\'t fulfill, rather, what you are capable of accomplishing now.
>>correct
Hi, Camille. Today, I\'m so flattered by your compliements!^^

>>correct

Observe the proper spelling of the word COMPLIMENTS.

Thank you for it and have a nice evening!zz

>>correct

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