Hi teacher :)

2011-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Thank you for calling again. I woke up again by your call. T.T Anyways, Happy thursday teacher :) I plan to take a OPIc. Do you know OPIc? this is speaking test. As you know, I'm trying to get a job. By the way, I need to OPIc score for getting a job. I'm going to change my course to OPIc. Maybe it will be changed tomorrow or next monday. But I think a present textbook is very informative. So I will study English through a present textbook after my OPIc score become IM or IH. Ah, I didn't answer you will buy me something while you called (I said, If you come here in korea, find me(look for me?)) I need to improve my pronunciation. Then.. See you tomorrow morning. I hope I become an early bird like you.

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Hi there Miss [이름]l!! I am happy because you and my mom have the same name?[이름]line? So cute!!  Oh, when are you going to have your OPIC test? That would be fine. I am familiar with this program also TOEIC.  Please call the manager for your change of course so they can arrange it for you. Any textbook will do for you but I think the textbook we are using now is okay but since you want you want to have the OPIC test, maybe we could use a textbook suitable for you. It is very important for people who are looking for a job. I bet you can make it^_^ Here's the correction for the composition: Thank you for calling again.  >> correct ( You're welcome)I woke up again by your call. T.T >> I was awaken by your call.Anyways, Happy thursday teacher :) >> correctI plan to take a OPIc. >> I am planning to take the OPIC course. Do you know OPIc? this is speaking test.>> Are you familiar with OPIC? This is a speaking test. (Yes, I do) As you know, I'm trying to get a job. >> correct. By the way, I need to OPIc score for getting a job. >> So, I need to have an OPIC score in getting a job.I'm going to change my course to OPIc. >> correctMaybe it will be changed tomorrow or next monday. >> Maybe I will change it by tomorrow or next Monday.But I think a present textbook is very informative. >> But, I think that the present textbook we're using is very informative.So I will study English through a present textbook after my OPIc score become IM or IH. >> So, I will still study English with the present textbook after getting IM or IH score in OPIC.Ah, I didn't answer you will buy me something while you called(I said, If you come here in korea, find me(look for me?) >> Ah, I wasn't able to answer you when you said you are going to buy something for me. What I meant was that you are going to look for me when you visit Korea.I need to improve my pronunciation. >> correctThen.. >> (not necessary, you can remove this)See you tomorrow morning. >> correctI hope I become an early bird like you. >> correct SEE YOU TOO!! HAVE A GREAT DAY!! 

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