Hi teacher :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you for calling again.
I woke up again by your call. T.T
Anyways, Happy thursday teacher :)
I plan to take a OPIc.
Do you know OPIc? this is speaking test.
As you know, I'm trying to get a job.
By the way, I need to OPIc score for getting a job.
I'm going to change my course to OPIc.
Maybe it will be changed tomorrow or next monday.
But I think a present textbook is very informative.
So I will study English through a present textbook after my OPIc score become IM or IH.
Ah, I didn't answer you will buy me something while you called
(I said, If you come here in korea, find me(look for me?))
I need to improve my pronunciation.
Then..
See you tomorrow morning.
I hope I become an early bird like you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Miss [이름]l!! I am happy because you and my mom have the same name?[이름]line? So cute!! Oh, when are you going to have your OPIC test? That would be fine. I am familiar with this program also TOEIC. Please call the manager for your change of course so they can arrange it for you. Any textbook will do for you but I think the textbook we are using now is okay but since you want you want to have the OPIC test, maybe we could use a textbook suitable for you. It is very important for people who are looking for a job. I bet you can make it^_^
Here's the correction for the composition:
Thank you for calling again.
>> correct ( You're welcome)I woke up again by your call. T.T
>> I was awaken by your call.Anyways, Happy thursday teacher :)
>> correctI plan to take a OPIc.
>> I am planning to take the OPIC course.
Do you know OPIc? this is speaking test.>> Are you familiar with OPIC? This is a speaking test. (Yes, I do)
As you know, I'm trying to get a job.
>> correct.
By the way, I need to OPIc score for getting a job.
>> So, I need to have an OPIC score in getting a job.I'm going to change my course to OPIc.
>> correctMaybe it will be changed tomorrow or next monday.
>> Maybe I will change it by tomorrow or next Monday.But I think a present textbook is very informative.
>> But, I think that the present textbook we're using is very informative.So I will study English through a present textbook after my OPIc score become IM or IH.
>> So, I will still study English with the present textbook after getting IM or IH score in OPIC.Ah, I didn't answer you will buy me something while you called(I said, If you come here in korea, find me(look for me?)
>> Ah, I wasn't able to answer you when you said you are going to buy something for me. What I meant was that you are going to look for me when you visit Korea.I need to improve my pronunciation.
>> correctThen..
>> (not necessary, you can remove this)See you tomorrow morning.
>> correctI hope I become an early bird like you.
>> correct
SEE YOU TOO!! HAVE A GREAT DAY!!
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