hi! teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
hi~~ teacher!
long time no see. teacher^^
how are you?
i'm enough of busy.. ㅠ.ㅠ
For english study watch movie.
the movie title "Notting Hill"
movie story is romance.
Celebrities and love story of an ordinary man.
this movie watched? teacher?
about after movie watched told to you!
about this a movie.
bye~~~^^*
See you after a while.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you? Long time no see too. Welcome back again! ^^
I understand that you werebusy for the past week. Don\'t worry.
I never never heard about the movie that you watched. If I will have a time, I will watch that movie.
It is good that your starting to watch English movies. Very good, [이름]. Keep it up.
Good luck and take care always, [이름]! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
long time no see. teacher^^
>> Long time, no see, teacher.how are you?>> How are you?i\'m enough of busy.. ㅠ.ㅠ>> I had been very busy.For english study watch movie.
>> For my English study, I watched a movie.the movie title \"Notting Hill\"
>> The title of the movie is \"Notting Hill\".movie story is romance.
>> The movie is a romance,Celebrities and love story of an ordinary man.
>> This is a story of an ordinary man.this movie watched? teacher?>> Have you watched this movie, teacher?about after movie watched told to you!about this a movie.>> I will soon tell the story after I fully watched the movie.
See you after a while.^^
>> Correct
>> OR: See you later.
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