hi teacher

2015-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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hi~ my teacher. during the long time I was can not my homework. sorry ㅠ-ㅠ - H O M E W O R K During the holiday I'm very many food making. Korean traditional food. Example) bulgogi, japchae, sujeonggwa, more... Divide with relatives and eat lots of food and many a talk. Korea traditional play game with my relatives.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you today? Don\'t worry about not doing all your homework. I totally understand because you were very busy. :) It\'s good that you enjoyed your holiday with your family. :) I\'m happy for you! ^^ By the way, please study your corrections below, okay. :) Take care and see you my dear.   ~~Teacher Kris during the long time I was can not my homework. sorry ㅠ-ㅠ>> During the long vacation, I was not able to make my homework. I\'m sorry for that.During the holiday I\'m very many food making.Korean traditional food.>> During the holiday, we made many kinds of Korean traditional food.Example) bulgogi, japchae, sujeonggwa, more...>> We made, bulgogi, japchae, sujeonggwa, and many many more. Divide with relatives and eat lots of food and many a talk.>> We distributed the foods to my relatives and we ate together and chatted together.Korea traditional play game with my relatives. >> I also played Korean traditional games with my relatives.

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