hi teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
hi~ my teacher.
during the long time
I was can not my homework. sorry ㅠ-ㅠ
- H O M E W O R K
During the holiday
I'm very many food making.
Korean traditional food.
Example) bulgogi, japchae, sujeonggwa, more...
Divide with relatives and eat lots of food and many a talk.
Korea traditional play game with my relatives.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you today? Don\'t worry about not doing all your homework.
I totally understand because you were very busy. :)
It\'s good that you enjoyed your holiday with your family. :)
I\'m happy for you! ^^
By the way, please study your corrections below, okay. :)
Take care and see you my dear.
~~Teacher Kris
during the long time I was can not my homework. sorry ㅠ-ㅠ>> During the long vacation, I was not able to make my homework. I\'m sorry for that.During the holiday I\'m very many food making.Korean traditional food.>> During the holiday, we made many kinds of Korean traditional food.Example) bulgogi, japchae, sujeonggwa, more...>> We made, bulgogi, japchae, sujeonggwa, and many many more. Divide with relatives and eat lots of food and many a talk.>> We distributed the foods to my relatives and we ate together and chatted together.Korea traditional play game with my relatives.
>> I also played Korean traditional games with my relatives.
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