hi teacher^.^
학생이 쓴 원문
hi teacher^.^
happy friday
Ysterday, i was eaten alcoholic drink with my office people.
So, late comeback my home.
Very thirsty a since daybreak.
Rerigerator open the door.
However, there is not a water. T.T
So,i was eaten mini tomato (20 each) kkkkk.
I ate tomatoe cause it has a moisture.
(~_~)
hihi
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you today? Why did you drink too much alcoholic drinks?
Maybe you suffered from hang over in the morning. kk.
Good thing, there were tomatoes in your refrigerator. kk.
Next time, don\'t drink too much beer, okay.
By the way, please study your corrections below.
Take care always! ^^
See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
Yesterday, i was eaten alcoholic drink with my office people.
>> Yesterday, I drank alcoholic drinks with my office mates.So, late comeback my home.
>> So, I went home late. Very thirsty a since daybreak.
>> I was very thirsty since morning.Rerigerator open the door.>> I opened the refrigerator.However, there is not a water. T.T
>> However, there is no water. T.TSo,i was eaten mini tomato (20 each) kkkkk.
>> So, I ate 20 mini tomatoes. kkkkkk.I ate tomatoe cause it has a moisture.
(~_~)
>> I ate tomatoes because it hydrates my body. (~_~)
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