Hi teacher~
학생이 쓴 원문
It's been a long long long time I've wrritten my composition last time.
I guess I will get your call on a road again.
I will walk to my home from the station where my bus stops.
My weight is the lightest since I was twenty.
I'm so happy to wait for summer.
I'll wear a bikini before I miss my youth.
It's a so hot recently like summer.
However, it's just June.
I'm worried about how much hot this summer.
Take care and let's talk soon :)
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
So you have lost weight!
You sound very confident to wear bikini this summer.
Haha! Don't laugh, but if you ask me the first time I wore bikini was last year in an isolated beach. I'm too skinny and shy.
I don't know if I will ever use bikini again in a public beach.
Talk to you later!
-Tiny^0^
It's been a long long long time I've wrritten my composition last time.
>> It's been a long long long time since the last time I've wrritten my composition.
I guess I will get your call on a road again.
>> I guess I will get your call on the road again.
I will walk to my home from the station where my bus stops.
>>correctMy weight is the lightest since I was twenty.
>>correctI'm so happy to wait for summer.
>>correct
>>I'm so happy waiting for summer.
I'll wear a bikini before I miss my youth.
>>correctIt's a so hot recently like summer.
>>correctHowever, it's just June.
>>correctI'm worried about how much hot this summer.
>> I'm worried about how much hot this summer would be.
Take care and let's talk soon. :)
>>correct
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