Hi teacher~

2011-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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It's been a long long long time I've wrritten my composition last time. I guess I will get your call on a road again. I will walk to my home from the station where my bus stops. My weight is the lightest since I was twenty. I'm so happy to wait for summer. I'll wear a bikini before I miss my youth. It's a so hot recently like summer. However, it's just June. I'm worried about how much hot this summer. Take care and let's talk soon :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! So you have lost weight! You sound very confident to wear bikini this summer. Haha! Don't laugh, but if you ask me the first time I wore bikini was last year in an isolated beach. I'm too skinny and shy. I don't know if I will ever use bikini again in a public beach. Talk to you later! -Tiny^0^ It's been a long long long time I've wrritten my composition last time. >> It's been a long long long time since the last time I've wrritten my composition. I guess I will get your call on a road again. >> I guess I will get your call on the road again. I will walk to my home from the station where my bus stops. >>correctMy weight is the lightest since I was twenty. >>correctI'm so happy to wait for summer. >>correct >>I'm so happy waiting for summer. I'll wear a bikini before I miss my youth. >>correctIt's a so hot recently like summer. >>correctHowever, it's just June. >>correctI'm worried about how much hot this summer. >> I'm worried about how much hot this summer would be. Take care and let's talk soon. :) >>correct

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