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hello , teacher Today,I am going to introduce to you about korean history In friday you asked me about it , but i can't explain to you because korea has long histroy Today, I will introduce to you about Japanese colonial era It started from1910 to 1945 for 35years at this time many people dead ,murdered , kidnnaping from Japanese japanese did anything they want in our country In 1919 we had March 1 Independence Movement The typical people in this independence movement is Yu Gwan-sun she was teenage girl she has to play and had fun in that age but she take part in demonstration and Pass away her age was only 17 it is very angry how can day killed a little girl ther is alot of story about japanese colonial era of course it took 35 years to independence if there was no people like yu gwan sun and other the korea was disappeared after independent people was so happy But they had to heard about sad story the korea seperate to north and south I will stop here and tell you more in class

Hello, [이름]! You like English writing, don\'t you? I have observed that you always send compositions. I really appreciate your willingness to enhance your writing skill. Writing a journal is really a help. Just keep it up! ~Teacher Chloe hello , teacher >>Hello, teacher.Today,I am going to introduce to you about korean history >>Today, I am going to tell you about Korean history.In friday you asked me about it , but i can\'t explain to you >>Last Friday, you asked me about it but I couldn\'t explain it to you. because korea has long histroy Today, I will introduce to you about Japanese colonial era >>Because Korea has a long history, I will talk about the history of Japanese Colonial Era instead. It started from1910 to 1945 for 35years >>It started from 1910 to 1945 for 35 years. at this time many people dead ,murdered , kidnnaping from Japanese >>During those years, many people were kidnapped, died and murdered by the Japanese. japanese did anything they want in our country In 1919 we had March 1 Independence Movement The typical people in this independence movement is Yu Gwan-sun >>Japanese did all things they want for our country. In 1919, March 1, we had our Independence Movement which was established by Yu Gwan-sun. she was teenage girl she has to play and had fun in that age >>She was a teenage girl who wanted to play and had fun at her age.but she take part in demonstration and Pass away her age was only 17 >>But, she took part in the demonstration and passed away at the age of 17. it is very angry how can day killed a little girl >>It brings me anger. How can they could kill a little girl? ther is alot of story about japanese colonial era >>There is a lot of stories about Japanese Colonial Era. of course it took 35 years to independence >>It took us 35 years to get independence. if there was no people like yu gwan sun and other the korea was disappeared >>If there were no Koreans like her, Korea would never get independence. after independent people was so happy >>When we had our independence, Koreans were so happy.But they had to heard about sad story the korea seperate to north and south >>But, they had to know about the sad story; the separation of North and South. I will stop here and tell you more in class >>I will stop from here and tell you more about it in our class.