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Hi teacher. Today i wanna talk about my story for job. When checking my story, please teach me the best expressions. Our World is getting globalized. If we want to be sueessful, we need to be very good in English. There are many people who are studying English very hard. Most of them have a great score on Toeic. however, They can`t speak English very well What is the problem? In Korea, We just study English only grammer accept for speaking. That`s why we can`t speak English even though we tipically study it for a long time.

Hi there [이름], Hope you had a great weekend. Yeah, I have heard about this before, I think it뭩 a dilemma that most Koreans face. Anyhow, thanks for this compo, you뭨e doing a good job in composing sentences. Keep it coming! -T.Dominic Hi teacher, Today i wanna talk about my story for job. >>Today I wannna talk about the story of my job. When checking my story, please teach me the best expressions. >>CORRECT >>When checking my story, please include the best expressions I could use. Our World is getting globalized. >>CORRECT >>Our world is becoming globalized. [or]If we want to be sueessful, we need to be very good in English. >>If we want to be successful we need to be fluent in English. There are many people who are studying English very hard. >>CORRECT >>There are many people who put and effort into studying English. [or]Most of them have a great score on Toeic. however, They can`t speakEnglish very well >>Most of them have a high score in TOEIC.  However, their speaking skills do not coincide with their grade. What is the problem? >>CORRECT >>What뭩 the matter? [or]In Korea, We just study English only grammer accept for speaking. >>In Korea, we only study English grammar but we do not exercise speaking. That`s why we can`t speak English even though we tipically study it for a long time. >>That뭩 why we can뭪 speak English fluently even though most of us study it for a long time.