Hi Teacher!
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This is [이름]! Today morning I was kind of busy so couldn't make a composition. But now I'm here! By the wasy after i hung up your phone class call I talked to my friend who is in the army. He actually always blame my enlgish. And finally he said my speaking english is fine but my grammer is sucks. So i though i didnt study grammer english for 5 or 6 years i think i should study that more!.
i wanted to write more but i was too much. i should get out of the office now! It's already 6:42pm.
I'll look fowaord to talking to you today!
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Hello [이름]!^^
I뭢 so happy you were able to make a composition tonight.^^
I think that you speak English well and yes, you may have troubles with your grammar but that뭩 okay, it뭩 normal to have that kind of problem and you can actually improve on that if you use the English language often.^^
Anyway, here are your grammar and spelling corrections. It would be nice that you read them and analyze the mistakes so you won뭪 encounter that same mistake again, okay? (^,^)
I뭢 looking forward to talking with you as well.
Take care my dear!^^
This is [이름]!
>>CORRECT!
Today morning I was kind of busy so couldn't make a composition.
>>This morning I was busy so couldn뭪 make a composition. OR
>>I was busy this morning and I didn뭪 have time to make a composition.
But now I'm here!
>>CORRECT!
By the wasy after i hung up your phone class call I talked to my friend who is in the army.
>>By the way, after I hung up for our phone class, I talked with my friend who is in the army.
He actually always blame my enlgish.
>> He actually always blames my English. OR
>>He actually blames my English most of the time.
And finally he said my speaking english is fine but my grammer is sucks.
>>He finally said that my English speaking is fine but my grammar sucks.
So i though i didnt study grammer english for 5 or 6 years i think i should study that more!.
>>So I thought I didn뭪 study English grammar for 5 to 6 years and I think I should study that more.i wanted to write more but i was too much.
>>I wanted to write more but this is too much.
i should get out of the office now! It's already 6:42pm.>>I should get out of the office now, it뭩 already 6:42PM.I'll look fowaord to talking to you today!
>>I look forward to talking with you today.
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