hi teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! teacher~!
I have a favor to ask you.
When you give me an essay writing homework, can you give me IELTS questions?
For example "Discuss" or "Opinion" or "Discuss and Opinion” or “Cause and Solution”…
For example:
Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games.
However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive
and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view.
Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
강사 첨삭
Hi! teacher~!
I have a favor to ask you.
When you give an essay homework, can you please give me questions related to IELTS?
For example, \"Discuss\" or \"Opinion\" or \"Discuss and Opinion” or “Cause and Solution”…
For example:
Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games.
However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive
and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view.
Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
I have a favor to ask you.
When you give an essay homework, can you please give me questions related to IELTS?
For example, \"Discuss\" or \"Opinion\" or \"Discuss and Opinion” or “Cause and Solution”…
For example:
Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games.
However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some feel that it is impossible for a country to be economically progressive
and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view.
Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.