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hi tutor . im young bin . um i'd like to speak english flunently . so i decided that i learn english at this site and . sorry to my question " i'd like to know about you " um infact my question wasn't it " when did you start english teacher at internet " actually my question is " when we start english study by online book and thankyou for you advice . i'll study try hard . help me ^^ have a good time .

Hello Young Bin. Thank you for writing down your composition. I really appreciate that you exert effort and time to learn English. Don't be afraid or shy to ask anything to me. I'm here to help you. I'm very glad to help you out. Always remember that commiting mistakes is part of learning. Have a nice weekend!   Here are my corrections for you.   hi tutor . im young bin . >>correct sentence >>Capitalize the first letter of each sentence.um i'd like to speak english flunently . >>Correct sentence. >> I’d, English, and fluently. Correct spellingsso i decided that i learn english at this site >>So, I decided to learn English on this site. >>Always capitalize /I/and . sorry to my question " i'd like to know about you " >>And I’m sorry about my question. “I’d like to know something about you”um infact my question wasn't it " when did you start english teacher at internet " >>Um, In fact my question wasn’t it. “When did you start as an on line teacher”?actually my question is " when we start english study by online book >>Actually, my question is “when we will start using our book”.and thankyou for you advice . >>And thank you for your advice.i'll study try hard . help me ^^ >>Correct sentence,. have a good time . >>Correct sentence.